Sunday Scribblings #94 – Covert
The color of reality is sometimes black.
Like when there is the persuasive aroma of sun-dappled longing.
Which forces wafting pleasure to be sheltered.
And urges the shapes of clandestine holding.
Where layered penalties veil the skin of certain truth.
Still, their cells act as a haven of veracity.
She.
And Her.
He.
And Him.
Covert lovers.
Liked the way it ends! Wonderful!
SS: I dream in brown
I like this – it has a ring of truth hidden in the finely honed words.
I love the phrasing – layered penalties and haven of veracity! Beautiful!
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Very beautiful poem. I like the way it builds.
Mothers in Arms
Nice and spicy!!
Dead Good! Right up my street!!
my favorite is the first line and "sun dappled longing." clandestine is also a great word choice.
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